3. I would have to say that this isn't very good at all. There is no message, speeling errors, and I can't even read it unless I zoom in 250%. Doesn't seem like any work was put into it. Hunter Michel Francis 2nd period
Nice job creating your story . . . text was too small, I had to zoom in and still had a hard time reading some of it. The last scene should have had an ending message for the audience such as "Remember to contact your credit card company and report the crime immediately". 9/10 JLang
good- 2 points
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Nick Nowakowski
6/10
Was a good idea, just wasn't clear on what the idea of the cartoon was.
Layout: 3 Content: 5 Total: 8/10
ReplyDeleteThere wasn't really a message just a story.
3. I would have to say that this isn't very good at all. There is no message, speeling errors, and I can't even read it unless I zoom in 250%. Doesn't seem like any work was put into it.
ReplyDeleteHunter Michel Francis 2nd period
Nice job creating your story . . . text was too small, I had to zoom in and still had a hard time reading some of it. The last scene should have had an ending message for the audience such as "Remember to contact your credit card company and report the crime immediately".
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JLang